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narumixkiri oneshot by ~ally21:iconally21:



Narumi was walking down the hall to the S.P. room. On the other side Kiri came running when she slipped and fell down and twisted her ankle.
“Just great!” she sighed. Narumi saw her on the floor and wondered what happened.
“Why are you on the floor, Mussy head?” he asked.
“None of your business!” she proclaimed. Narumi annoyed turned around. Then he heard Kiri scream in pain. Kiri fell down again but it hurt more than last time.
“Do you twist your ankle? He asked. “You shouldn’t stand on it.”
“And why do you care?” she said.
“Would you be quiet!? I’m trying to be nice here!” Narumi yelled. He looks at her sad face and sighs.
“Come on don’t make that face,” he said.
“Will it break?” Kiri asked worried.
“Not if you do stand on it.” Narumi gets up and grabbes Kiri by her waist and the legs.
“Wh-at are you doing!?” Kiri asked shocked at what Narumi is doing.
“I’m talking you to the Nurse’s office,” Narumi said while blushing. At the Nurse’s office, Kiri was being treated.
“There now you be careful,” the nurse said.
“Okay,” Kiri said. Kiri turns around to see if Narumi was still here but he wasn’t. At the S.P. room, Narumi was sitting down on his chair and looks out the window. He sighs and looks back at his sketch of a new hair design. Then he hears the door open and he turns around to that Kiri standing in front of the door.
“Kiri?”
“Thank you for what you did,” she said nervously.
“Uh… no problem I guess,” Narumi looks out the window.
“Narumi, I… uh…” Kiri said stumbling.
“Yes what is it?”
“I…can’t say it!”
“Say what?” Narumi walks toward her. He stands right in front of her.
“I love you, Narumi!” Kiri yells.
“Kiri…” Narumi said shocked. “I… uh… love you too.” Narumi turns his face to the side blushing like crazy. Kiri gets on her toes and puts her lips out. Narumi surprised grabbes her shoulders and moves his face closer to hers. Their lips touch each others. They stay that way for a few seconds and Narumi hugs her.
“So…now that we confessed to each other how we feel. Do you want to go out with me?” Narumi offered. Kiri smiled and said. “Yes I would Naru-Naru.”
   “Kiri can you do me a favor?” he asked.
“Yeah”
“Don’t call me Naru-Naru!!” Narumi yelled.
“Geez is this how you treat your girlfriend, so noisy,”
“Fine, just don’t call me that,” Narumi sighed. Then Kiri jumped and hugged him and said.
“I love you!”
©2008-2009 ~ally21
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Author's Comments

this is my first one shot so i dont nkow how good it is.
KiriXnarumi!!!! forever!!!

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:iconally21:
thank you!

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"There are so many times when I should of died.." -Alphonse
Poor Al :(
If Alphonse was a seductive man his name would be Fred :)
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Hmm. It was cute, but I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes. And I really can't picture Kiri or Narumi doing/saying those things. Not their style...

Ha ha... sorry if I 'm beingrude or anything! ^^;

I still liked it though.

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It keeps coming back to me
I remember this pain
It spreads across my eyes
Everything is dull
:iconally21:
nah its okay.
thanks

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"There are so many times when I should of died.." -Alphonse
Poor Al :(
If Alphonse was a seductive man his name would be Fred :)
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:icontails232323:
umm, kiri has a more relaxing personality . but great!!

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:iconally21:
sorry it was my first oneshort and fanfic of beatypop
but thanks!!

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"There are so many times when I should of died.." -Alphonse
Poor Al :(
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:iconxxsushirollxx:
lol cute XD <3

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:iconally21:
why thanks

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"There are so many times when I should of died.." -Alphonse
Poor Al :(
If Alphonse was a seductive man his name would be Fred :)
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:iconxxsushirollxx:
ur welcome ^^

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